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Always watching always waiting always hunting, for you. It’s time to fear the shadows little one.
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Level 1 - This is let down by poor mise en scene - it is too obviously set in the drama studio, yet you could have used appropriate local places around the village. There needs to be more variety of shots especially close ups. Where has the nursery rhyme been taken from? This needs crediting or recorded yourself. Overall, the meaning isn't really apparent to the viewer. Also you need to sort out the continuity errors e.g. still of dead body photo ( and clips of her "dead" shouldn't be noticably moving!). You should also use original copyright free music for your film as this is your main task.
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